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Thursday, 28 June 2012

my story, from my love poem..

Edward returns ;)

Strolling steadily down the polished corridor,Edward Cullen and his family,Jasper,Emmett,Rosalie and Alice, were talking about there human lives,but Rosalie soon changed the subject after remembering her poor life.They reached the end of the corridor,and soon struck eyes on their usual table, it was more shiny than usual it had a touch to it they must have changed cleaner thought Jasper curiously. They all sat down, Edward started scanning the room(with his beedy- black eyes) to see if there were any other changes besides the table, he saw a girl, she was quite pretty, but he lost focus and just looked away. .Edward got really confused, as he is a vampire he has the great abillity of reading minds,but he couldn`t read hers.  He needed to know who she was so he looked again.,this time it was awkward she was looking back at him,they sat there for approximatly ten seconds gazing in to one anothers eyes, Edward knew he couldn`t do it, it would be to dangerous for her, she is a human and he a vampire, it wasn`t going to work, or was it?

Bella(the girl Edward set his eyes on) thought about Edward all day and night just remembering his handsome face, she needed to know more, so she set off on the way to Jessica's, her friend from school, to see if she knew anymore, Jessica said Bella might as well give up, she doesn`t have a chance with such a remarkable young man like him.  Bella sighed and shuffled home. On the way she came across three strange, quite nice looking people` a girl and two boys, the girl was nice, she had ginger hair and red black eyes, but the boys were hard to tell because it was dark but their hair was probably dark due to the fact she could see the girls bright hair. "I am James, this is Victoria and he is Laurant", said the thin one in a German/Spanish accent,
"Hi,do you no Edward Cullen", questioned Bella, suddenly thier eyes changed to red, Bella got very anxious and tried to run. Out of nowhere a silver Volvo spun around the misty corner,"get n the car" yelled a farmiliar man who she didn`t quite know, Bella didn`t care who it was, she was scared enough so she jumped in.

Strangley Bella found herself at a restaurant with her destined partner Edward Cullen, they got along really well, Bella found out he was a vampire but wasn`t that bothered, she trusted him and knew he would protect her from anyone else.  Weeks past and they did everything together they went out, stayed in, everything you could imagine, until that day came...

...Edward found himself in a bad positon, so told Bella he was leaving for good, Bella didn`t take that very well, she was distraught and wanted to die, so she went out with her wolf friend Jacob Black and his wolf pack ,they went pigeon shooting, Bella wasn`t very keen on that so she randomly shot herself, well it wasn`t random it was because she missed Edward and the Cullens,  Edwards sister had a vision that Bella was dead and told Edward Cullen.  Edward wasn`t a happy vampire, he felt heart broken so he tried to kill himself,  He attemped to come back and jump off Bella's house tied up to show his love, that plan didn`t go very well, as he was jumping,  he landed on Blla`s car wich had just pulled up.  Tey both looked at each other in joy, Bella ran up to Edward and gave him a huge hug and didn`t let go.  Not ever again.


By Chloe Evans/Cullen <3

1 comment:

  1. Great effort Chloe, here's to hoping you don't get sued by the makers of New Moon... Lots of great language here, I love the opening: "Strolling steadily down the polished corridor" - starting with an verb (Strolling) and adverb (Steadily) is a powerful way to start any piece of writing like this.

    However, I can see that you typed this straight into Blogger - very risky! I would strongly suggest that you copy and paste this into Word or another word processing program so you can run a spellcheck as there seems to be quite a few mistyped spelling errors that don't do you justice. After a spellcheck and proofread you can just edit the post and pop the checked version back, job done!

    Target:Have a glance at your use of "there" and "their", as well as "do you no Edward Cullen" (know) - as spellcheck won't help you with selecting the correct word to use here.

    Well done!

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